i am crying......-''''''

it's my own feeling, sometime i feel much hopeless

i am crying
so i am crying

tear is floating over my cheek
so i am crying

heart can't hold straw
so i am crying

spirit is out of spirit
so i am crying

there is nothing to make me lough
so i am crying

everything is against me
so i am crying

nothing to demonish my tearing eye
so i am crying

i am not to take any soft corner from anyone
so i am crying

i am crying
so i am crying

Author's Note

is it clear?

Reviews

[mandy]

it is good to let the tears flow sometimes,,,they release some of our sorrow..keep writing. i think in writing out our feelings, that it helps us to stay connected to ourselves and helps us deal with our unhappiness. true joy comes from within..

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

there is nothing to make me lough
so i am cryingevery

thing is against me
so i am crying

I'm guessing you could see the thing wrong about the lines above. But overall I like your poem. We are human and so let the tears flow

Keep writing

[de_maruf]

thank's for notice me

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

welcome :)

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

Why u crying more>?

[de_maruf]

because i am crying

[Coyote Poetry]

Tear are a good thing. Mean we are still alive and have some emotion left. When the tears fade away. We can become empty. Nice flow of thoughts and thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

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The anaphora you use "So I am crying" really helps make your concept clear in your piece. Good job

[gombeggar]

spirit is out of spirit...wonderful line