nothing for me

nothing for me

A Poem by de_maruf
"

there is nothing in world actually what a man imagine that's why imagination is better

"
nothing is here for me
 the desired angel
 softening touchable heart
 who is for feel me
 a pegasus to reach her
 reach her over there
 no deepness i feel in my heart
 to read other so i think about
 nothing is here for me

© 2012 de_maruf


Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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de_maruf
truth is beauty

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You are a brave soul for writing in a language you have not mastered. Yet, this poem has a sadness that comes through, and passion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Interesting. This makes me really think things over and reread the poem over and over again

Nice Write

Posted 11 Years Ago


Interesting visions create by your words. I believe Angles would have only tears for us on this earth. Would be no place for them with men with only profit and coldness in their hearts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is difficult to figure, yeah

Posted 11 Years Ago


Well, I get the gist of it but there is that translation problem when representing as a native English speaker might understand it better. For example, this phrase, "who is for feel me" ...really needs rework. It makes absolutely no sense in English. Keep working on it. You'll get it! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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dhaka, south, Bangladesh



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