little my memoirs

my childhood thinking

i am gonna fall
i am not so tall
i don't like hursh
but always i crush
playground miss me
i always steal the key
i don't like to miss
to enjoy the playground hiss
my limit is the sky
but it is so high
that's why for all
i am gonna fall.

Author's Note

as always i wished

Reviews

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

my limit is the sky
but it is so high

Lovely and favored lines you have there. All I can say is that it's a good write :)

[de_maruf]

thank's

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

funny

[Coyote Poetry]

Children need to play and test life. I like the vision create by the statements in this poem.
"my limit is the sky
but it is so high"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[gombeggar]

has a rythmn for sure and the structure is good

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Hmmm... for English speakers, I think there are some things such as "hursh" and "tn miss" that may elude them. The rest of it seems to work, OK.