half hearted heart

nothing

half hearted heart

red eye, a killing expression
i am depress and in depression
something can never be changed
but my eyes getting tired


it's pretty unbearable
tiring days getting me along
for some unexpected
some appealing happened to me
that i don't deserve
so i getting thing
the unpleasant one
everyone avoiding one


that irritating unhappiness
irritating me and
make me halfhearted and 
bring the expression of killing
and make it red as red

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Mark]

Despair is a heavy shackle; sometimes we just can't shake it off. Good write.

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

It's a nice poem it is but you kind of lost me in the middle. But you got me back

A good write

Keep writing

[de_maruf]

thanks

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

I can only go by the words and the order that you have placed them, adjacent to one another. From that, this piece seems to be about anger, rage, a killing rage that engulfs someone but that someone is a halfhearted participant and their involvement is depressing them. I'm sure I got that all wrong. Can you please explain? Thank you.

[de_maruf]

it's about depression.
the thought behind it is a man detached from his heartiest one, he can't sleep for many night for his depression.
than's for read

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor]

You welcome. Thank your for the clarification.

[gombeggar]

lots of emoting there

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem of love disappointment. Great description made the words come alive. Unhappiness is like a sickness. Leave us in a bad state. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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A truly amazing poem! Great rhyme in some parts! The flowa nd rhytm fit perfectly! 100/100 :D

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

good