For you

Just need to rant a bit

Put my body through hell so yours would never know pain
Made sure your days were sunny even if I was stuck in the rain
I tired to be better because that's what you deserve
Never thought my life would be thrown this curve
Destroyed my mind, and my spirit too
I didn't care as long as it helped you
I gave you it all, my body, mind and love
I'm just sorry that it wasn't enough
Tried so hard to be all I could be
But, now I'm just haunted by your memory
Thoughts and dreams of a future that'll never come true
All this pain and suffering, just for you

Author's Note

I'm just in pain I needed to rant

Reviews

[Randolph]

If this is what pops up as a rant, I selfishly wait for a fit. Sorry. Just being true. Nicely done.

[DarkArtz 0703]

damn..... I felt like that with this really stupid guy.... I love it its good

[C_theSurrealist]

It's so expressive. You unleash what you have felt in this poem. Job well done! :D Keep writing.

[Donicca Dona L]

unfortunately whatever we do for some people won't be enough, but it was worth trying it, as long as we try it for love. beautiful!