Moon

Moon

A Poem by Maze
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Let this poem define itself.

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Lonely nights, creep in

The moon is my only light left

You never said goodbye

© 2017 Maze


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Almost there, the middle and last line both have an extra syllable. Other than that, nice work!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alright I will take a crack at defining it.
It someone who is dying the moon being the last of there life before the darkness comes. In that moment they feel unfinsihed as they never had time to saygoodbye to the world.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 10, 2017
Last Updated on October 10, 2017
Tags: #moon, #lonely, #goodbye

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Maze
Maze

Melbourne, Yarra Valley , Australia



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I'm one of those writters thats afraid to speak their mind. Someone that has been pushed aside their whole life, but is looking for that chance to brake free from their cage, and be who I am meant to .. more..

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