Beautiful

Beautiful

A Poem by (MC) Aurora
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To you and poetry. Let's see what's new. See the pattern 3,3; 4,4; 5,5.

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A beautiful poetry makes you feel beautiful,
A beautiful creation, art of passion
Complete compassion.

A beautiful person, makes you beautiful,
Like an abstract expression,
Against oppression.

I rely on them and live on them, 
Snuggling up in their arms,
I feel beautiful,
Million times more than I am.

Could any fear troll me?
When they stand by me,
Trust my belief and drag me along the beauty of life.
Yes drag me, as they know how stubborn I am.

I couldn't think of a valentine precious than they,
The day they put their steps into my life,
And I deliberately let them fall in my insecurity,
Now the light comes from depth, from them,
Rather absorbing from beauty.

They are sweet as nothing could be,
Yes the person and my poetry, just they and I,
I don't dream any treasure or royalty.
I feel an empress from their presence,
Just because they are, I love being me!

© 2020 (MC) Aurora


Author's Note

(MC) Aurora
Have fun with this new pattern of poetry... hope you like it.

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Mmm
Nothing better than snuggling up to someone you love
Your love makes them beautiful
Their love makes you more beautiful
If that were possible
When a person is as beautiful as you

Posted 6 Hours Ago


(MC) Aurora

6 Hours Ago

Aha! Maybe when they can fall for me as much as I do... :>...shy* shy*....hehe
Wild Rose

6 Hours Ago

Continue to love being you
Another innovative tribute to the companionship wirh poetry. Designed in a fantastic way with words. Kudos.

Posted 8 Hours Ago


(MC) Aurora

6 Hours Ago

Aww! Thank You so much!
TRULY U WRITE WELL AURORA, NICE TO READ YOUR WORK .LOVED YOUR FIRST TWO STANZA MORE . KEEP SHARING UR WORK :)

Posted 10 Hours Ago


(MC) Aurora

6 Hours Ago

surely i will :)
Yes I agree all arts are pleasing to the eye and the soul sings a bit while viewing these , love your style and message a romance with the arts and yourself, beautifully done.

Posted 1 Day Ago


(MC) Aurora

1 Day Ago

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed. Hope you'd like to see the other poems on my page as well.
Katrina Mckeown

1 Day Ago

Your welcome and you are also welcome to read some work I did previously before my writers block :) .. read more
Katrina Mckeown

1 Day Ago

It’s a pleasure as always to read your beautiful poetry :)
I see what you're doing, I love what you're doing, I feel what I'm reading, and it's all-around stupendous. You have 4 lines where it's either grammatically odd or your word choice I'm not sure is conveying the message you're intending, and I would advise you take a look at those (Stanza 3, Line 4: needs to start with an "A", no poetic licence can justify its absence; Stanza 5, Lines 4 and 5: 4 needs some pronoun or article before "depth", and 5 is where I'm not sure "absorbing" is used correctly as you can't absorb "from" something; Last Stanza, Line 5: that phrase in bold? What are you trying to say?).

But overall, holy kwap, I think this your best - this is def your bar. Stanza 4 had some self-deprecating humour that was just amazing; just beautiful!! Well done!

Posted 1 Day Ago


(MC) Aurora

1 Day Ago

Thank you! I'll certainly look into the correction. :)
emipoemi

1 Day Ago

my pleasure.

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(MC) Aurora
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Hello!...This is a sweet little troublesome girl... I am a young artist and I love reading and writing. I am something like addicted to books. I have a silly habit, that is I sleep with a book in m.. more..

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