A Poem by MOON

Pearls of life lying on the ocean floor

winds of change and tears that from my eyes fall

 say you love me when the savage  wind calls

wake me from the sorrow of ice cold shores


dreaming  I have walked with you at my side

waltzing in time holding touching the sky

sometimes a fall  yet we would always glide

Beyond the grey misery we would fly  


dwelling in paradise adorned with gems

 stone worn by  kings blunting a poison pen

The past is gone and the future is when

we still the pain, bleeding hearts and then


life will find us on the dark ocean floor

life will find us bringing us to the shore

© 2012 MOON

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The pearls of life, meanwhile pearl through the many years on the deep and darken seabed, But the end is in sight ... There are miracles ... I feel the positivity in your ending, beautiful moon. The structure too. It has a special touch...



Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


the journey, barnacle cleavage to navigate, Oyster beds,butter, parsley,cayenne,half n half sucked up together in a big New Orleans pot,curled edges steamed, sand crusted pearls firm to tooth bring a lovers smile to me and her, a Neville Brother waling around the block.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Pearls fall from saddened hearts to form an ocean to drown in
Life like love so often rips, leaving a trail of desolate and broken dreamers.....but we all dream don't we.

As always enjoyed what your words bring to my simple mind. :O)

Posted 10 Years Ago

Some things are worth never letting go, never forgetting. I guess that is why we write. A moving, picturesque piece

Posted 10 Years Ago

personification is one of my favorite themes, so is love...oh, let's not forget life
masterfully written and leaves a pleasant aftertaste....nice

Posted 10 Years Ago

As so often Life does find us, like the song by Monsters and Men, "The truth may bury this, ship will carry on,
to shore".
Breath~taking write my friend!

Posted 10 Years Ago

true love always find a way cannot die..
such a beautiful read full of heartfelt passion
thank you for share x

Posted 10 Years Ago

experiences are our gems yes..

that bring out the beautiful wisdom, of our eyes

lovely my friend


Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

powerful emotions entwined with beautiful imagery, encouraging the reader to swish and sway with the rhythms of the words, very good.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Wisdom, strength in this beautiful piece is what stands out. I like the way it flows and the message of life in this. Nice work.

Posted 10 Years Ago

winds of change and tears. Very poetic

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on July 18, 2012
Last Updated on July 18, 2012



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