A Poem by MOON

Pearls of life lying on the ocean floor

winds of change and tears that from my eyes fall

 say you love me when the savage  wind calls

wake me from the sorrow of ice cold shores


dreaming  I have walked with you at my side

waltzing in time holding touching the sky

sometimes a fall  yet we would always glide

Beyond the grey misery we would fly  


dwelling in paradise adorned with gems

 stone worn by  kings blunting a poison pen

The past is gone and the future is when

we still the pain, bleeding hearts and then


life will find us on the dark ocean floor

life will find us bringing us to the shore

© 2012 MOON

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The pearls of life, meanwhile pearl through the many years on the deep and darken seabed, But the end is in sight ... There are miracles ... I feel the positivity in your ending, beautiful moon. The structure too. It has a special touch...



Posted 10 Years Ago

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The past is gone and the future is when we still the pain, bleeding hearts and then.....magnificent write.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Wonderful imagery embedded in your marvelous phrases. I applaud the third stanza, I love that the most.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Beautifully expressed--the kind of love to be sought--always.

Posted 10 Years Ago

ahh, to 'glide' ... beautiful write

Posted 10 Years Ago

All beautiful write.
I love so many lines especially:
say you love me when the savage wind calls. Wow

Posted 10 Years Ago

Lif is as lovely as pearls...

I would have written the last line as: "Life will find and bring us to the shore."

Posted 10 Years Ago

i loved the poem but this two last lines are just amazing, i loved it, i also liked the rhyming, fabuloussssssssssss

Posted 10 Years Ago

I LOVED the imagery in this piece! You have a knack for analogies as well. It gave me a feeling of being swept out of our darkest times and into a happier light. Or when we travel through past, present, and future trying to find our true placement in life. At least that's what comes to mind for me. Very elegant.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Lovely structure to this piece: this poem is a pearl. I think you have discovered that beautiful treasures are often fashioned in the dark...

Posted 10 Years Ago

Surreal imagery at its best and wonderfully penned as well ..

Posted 10 Years Ago


10 Years Ago

Thank you , most appreciated .

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Added on July 18, 2012
Last Updated on July 18, 2012



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