Pearls

Pearls of life lying on the ocean floor

winds of change and tears that from my eyes fall

 say you love me when the savage  wind calls

wake me from the sorrow of ice cold shores

 

dreaming  I have walked with you at my side

waltzing in time holding touching the sky

sometimes a fall  yet we would always glide

Beyond the grey misery we would fly  

 

dwelling in paradise adorned with gems

 stone worn by  kings blunting a poison pen

The past is gone and the future is when

we still the pain, bleeding hearts and then

 

life will find us on the dark ocean floor

life will find us bringing us to the shore

Reviews

The pearls of life, meanwhile pearl through the many years on the deep and darken seabed, But the end is in sight ... There are miracles ... I feel the positivity in your ending, beautiful moon. The structure too. It has a special touch...

Lovely.

E.L.

[Debbie_Philly]

Beautiful !!! I love the imagery !! :)

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Nice poem I like the flow and how it is a defined statement in almost a carefree way

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

pearls sure are beautiful!

and the first stanza is my fav!

[G!o]

So beautiful...well written with so much weight put on such simple words. "...say you love me when the savage wind calls...wake me from the sorrow of ice cold shores..." Great work...

[Eve]

Such a beautiful poem and I just love this stanza so much, well done:dreaming I have walked with you at my side

waltzing in time holding touching the sky

sometimes a fall yet we would always glide

Beyond the grey misery we would fly

[Owlgirl]

I love the ending! This is gorgeous, and enchanting, and elegant, simply amazing!

[writing mojo]

this poem housed well defined amplitude of wanting more than an average shore..good stuff

[Layla J Omorose]

Beautifully written and well expressed. I sense darkness and loneliness within this poem. Life is an ocean where the ocean floor is far beneath us. And the waves toss us and spin us around until we are trapped and feel as if there is no way out. Very good write.

[Extant]

Life seems an ocean with shores housing many things; we find one refugee is adorned with ice and crawl back to the tide. We are all still searching for pearls in black depths, but its when we realize that life exists outside of the water we are finally free.

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. wow ... amazingly beautiful poetry, my friend ... haunting, captivating and soulful ... life will indeed "find us" ... and we will be rescued ... i agree with that thought a lot ... i believe in life ... and the possibilities that exist because we're all alive ...