Loving You

Loving You

A Poem by MOON

Days I remember cold in the summer heat

There was my heart body and soul there to bleed

All the dreams I desired slipped through my hand

Whipped by bone emotion I could barely stand

 

One day when hope was all but gone you were there

Standing tall catching my fall I could not care

A blink of an eye all anguish washed away

It seemed that night was suddenly turned to day

 

Now I hold you in my being soft summer rain

You cleansed wounds and disinfected my pain

You brought me gifts of art and inked storied writes

I could touch the lustrous sky and find new heights

 

Now I sit in splendour I could not go back

You pointed the track there is nothing I lack

In me all the golden dreams I sought in you

In homage captured heart you altered my view

© 2013 MOON


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aw.. that is lovely..a perfect tribute to your love..

Posted 7 Years Ago


MOON

7 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by!
this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooo bwautiful.....!!!!!
the loveliest poem ,i could ever read....!!!
very very very well done....
with best wishes,
saumya

Posted 7 Years Ago


MOON

7 Years Ago

Thanks Saumya for your generous review. Regards!
Saumya

7 Years Ago

oh..III you are highly welcomed..!!!
take care,
saumya
Thanks Khalid most appreciated .

Posted 7 Years Ago


very nice flow, very sweet images, very clever words picking, from all aspects, very enjoying to read..

Posted 7 Years Ago


Such an enchanting poem...... which I adored reading as much as I adored the imagery that went with it.


A moving and endearing write.... :O)

Posted 7 Years Ago


MOON

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review, most appreciated.
Take care
a truly wonderful piece of prose on discovery and embellishment of those deep feelings which are love.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very fine piece of poetry I must say...
great :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


beautiful picture!

"You brought me gifts of art and inked storied writes"

is my favorite line

Posted 7 Years Ago


MOON

7 Years Ago

Many thanks! Take care!
Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

7 Years Ago

you're welcome; you too ;)
a meaningful tribute....I enjoyed, thanks

Posted 7 Years Ago



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