Midnight Flowers

Midnight Flowers

A Poem by MOON

 

Don’t tell me I am not to dance amongst the midnight flowers

Walk away pretend the hours of winning your core is done

That it is my heart you shun and there is no April showers

 In the brace of your hold so tight your heart can’t be won

When the door slams on this fiery sunset your presence end our hours

Still I remember that in your weakening love flowers

Don’t tell me there can be no beauty in the breaking dawn

In that quintessential moment in eternity I was born

 

 

© 2013 MOON


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Beautiful piece....stunning! Thank you for sharing your talent!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Romance, commitment, endearment all within the words of your poem that leave a beautiful fragrance in the air! Yes, dance amongst the midnight flowers and remember that which is special to you!

Posted 4 Years Ago


MOON

4 Years Ago

Thanks Sheila , take care.
i like the drip drop rhythm as if tears
could paint the scene on skin trembling
from what poetry can blossom to release
excellent piece

Posted 4 Years Ago


Terrific imagery.

A couple of small edits: "…there [are] not April showers"
"…on this fiery sunset, your presence [ends]" [not the comma after sunset too]

I was a little lost on the line, "weakening love flowers" Is that meant to be a thing, a type of flower, to be "love flowers" growing ever weaker?


Posted 4 Years Ago


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MOON

4 Years Ago

Thanks I do read but don't pay attention to punctuation, a huge failing ....ha that's my excuse and .. read more
MomzillaNC

4 Years Ago

LOL! I usually try to go back and add punctuation, trying to use to lead my reader where the poem to.. read more
"Walk away pretend the hours of winning your core is done" - This line is great, it is so true, we do it all the time. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


MOON

4 Years Ago

Thank u
Most appreciative.
Don’t tell me there can be no beauty in the breaking dawn

In that quintessential moment in eternity I was born

this is lovely.

Posted 4 Years Ago


MOON

4 Years Ago

Thank you, go well.
no may flowers if no april showers, ultimate beauty is on the other side of dawn

Posted 5 Years Ago


MOON

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
Awesome poem and I liked your rhymes

Posted 5 Years Ago


MOON

5 Years Ago

Thank you most appreciated. Will stop by soon.
a most creative and enchanting piece of writing ....beautifully penned in poetic expression



Posted 5 Years Ago


MOON

5 Years Ago

Thanks Fran appreciate your review. Take care.
simply Beautiful.



very lovely and sweet.


Don’t tell me there can be no beauty in the breaking dawn

In that quintessential moment in eternity I was born



Thank you for Sharing this Beautiful piece.


Blessings. Kindred poet

Posted 5 Years Ago


MOON

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review. Go well!
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

5 Years Ago

You're very welcome my friend. It's my pleasure. Blessings. Kindred poet

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