Blood world

Blood world

A Poem by MOON




All the sorrows of the world laid bare
Plains , empty fields and bloody air
You will find us in the corners dark
Sharpening knives of history stark

Ride on my black horse of pain
Let my brutal heart stain
For I have tasted human flesh
When I am done your blackened ash

Life should be taken you are a pawn
For you I leave only a false dawn
Gender , your religion your face
Let it all be laid to waste

For I have deemed I should be a lord
Why in this world should this be odd
Through all time a state of disgrace
Blood is the imprint we leave in haste

We are masters of repeating the past
From God's kingdom we will be cast

© 2015 MOON


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dan
MOON, This piece bleeds dark and I am a big fan of dark. This dark entity around whom the piece centers seems as if he/she is content to be kept under wraps and not flagrantly obnoxious. The entity want to be a lord? Who is there to put a stop to the desire? Other entities will fight for the spot...will it really happen or will it not?
Very nicely done! take care...dan

Posted 5 Years Ago


MOON

5 Years Ago

Thank you Dan , most appreciated. Take care.
Honest and direct thoughts dear Poet. It is sad we repeat the mistake of others.
"We are masters of repeating the past
From God's kingdom we will be cast"
I tell all people. Know history or bad deeds will be repeated. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 5 Years Ago


MOON

5 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote always appreciate your comments, thanks for stopping by.
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Always my pleasure to read your work and you are welcome.
Through all time a state of disgrace
Blood is the imprint we leave in haste

very powerful thought provoking word tapestry...the above quote is remarkably true

Posted 5 Years Ago


MOON

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much, take care.
great write...i especially liked the last two lines

Posted 6 Years Ago


MOON

6 Years Ago

Thank you , take care!
we never learn from our mistakes, do we?

we just keep repeating the same bad history.

nicely expressed...

j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


MOON

6 Years Ago

No we don't , thank you for the review.
Great write.
Refers the popular saying,"History repeats itself".
Thanks for sharing the mind blowing work.


Posted 6 Years Ago


zainul

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome dear friend.
I am well.
I hope you and all members of your famil.. read more
MOON

6 Years Ago

thanks sadly lost a cousin unexpectedly.
zainul

6 Years Ago

I am very sorry to learn about the loss.
I pray for the eternal peace of your cousin.
A deep write....loved the reference to repeating the past...replete with wisdom.....well penned.

Posted 6 Years Ago


MOON

6 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by appreciate it.
Blood across our planet is a sad state and your words express that. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Both gritty and sensitive. Good balance.

Posted 6 Years Ago


MOON

6 Years Ago

Thank you Carolyn, most apprecaited.
What a powerful rhythm and rhyme... a journey through the darkest places... the unsettled, abandoned world full of shadows. An amazing write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


MOON

6 Years Ago

Thanks Craig , always look forward to your reviews. Hope you well.. Take care.

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