Rhett

Rhett

A Poem by MOON




Rhett

 Maybe I will waken in the morning maybe I won't
You became the reason for my promised dawn
I was always counting the days lined with gold
Never once thinking it could oh so quickly fold

Standing and waiting for the time to be right
Always focusing on some future light
Till the present ran out and became the past
Death was a shadow waiting in the wings to be cast

Maybe I will waken in the morning maybe I won't
There is just too many days left for me to mourn
I always saw us together someday growing old
Now all my seasons are lined in freezing cold

Maybe I will waken in the morning maybe I won't
You taught me love was never to be owned

© 2016 MOON


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Heart-breaker, mystical Moon.
Painfully portrayed melancholy--requiring profound insight.
A powerful piece, good poetess!

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thanks Jimmy miss my precious love.
wouldn`t it be nice if we could fall in love and live happily ever after,but love can be a two edged sword,you wrote it great...

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Alas we can't and death is so final...thank you take care
Your sad words pull at the heartstrings, and yet, so beautifully written.

Julie

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thank you Julie he was one of a kind , precious and missed.
The lessons of love. Hard lessons sometimes.
"Maybe I will waken in the morning maybe I won't
There is just too many days left for me to mourn
I always saw us together someday growing old
Now all my seasons are lined in freezing cold "
The above lines. Solid and I could write a epic tale from. Thank you Moon for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

I lost the most precious person in my life , words can't honour him. Thanks go well
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I understand and you are welcome.
A very touching poem... we must love wholeheartedly everyday and express it unedited because we never know when our last breath is coming.

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Death is a shock and it came too soon,thank you .
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

2 Years Ago

Always does and is.
MOON,
Is this a memorial? You have shared vulnerably the preciousness of the love that humanity long for and not all are able to acquire. "love never to be owned" your closing words speak volumes. We have and give for the simple gift it is. Thankyou so much Blessings Kathy

Posted 2 Years Ago


You thought my love was never to be owned....wraps erything together so tightly. There are too many days...I wish things were wrapped that tightly...always a gamble...always an unknown...it is beautifully sad.

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thanks I lost my dearest heart a week ago.
The Walking Queen

2 Years Ago

I am so sorry for your loss. Wishes of serenity for you, dear Moon.
MOON

2 Years Ago

Thank you, take care.
Poignant and perceptive.
An outstanding piece of work, Moon!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Your words flow like music, a song of the soul, moving through the seasons of light and darkness, hovering over us. Freedom often comes with such a price.

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thanks Craig always make my day when you comment.
Your writing comes through best in the second stanza. You have some nice lines in this write. Valentine

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thank you most appreciated.

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