Eternity

Eternity

A Poem by MOON

Eternity

 Your grace is all I have now that you are gone
 I can see your face true love waiting to be reborn
 In the echoes, in the silence, in the dark
 I was shackled , you were the rainbows arc

 Grace is the heart that kept me from falling apart
Grace is in your stories your works of art
Grace walks with me through all time
Grace is the years you were all mine

 Love can flower on a barren plain
 Love can flower it has your name
 I can grieve for the loss of you
Yet you left vistas and a universal view

 That nothing dies when love is key
 You are invisible but eternally with me

© 2017 MOON


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This is beautiful, truly beautiful. captures how the impressions people make on us never die, and that the memories never truly fit the space they once occupied.holding on to memories, even though itsa mix of emotions, really helps us understand the value of the time we have, and time lost. I think everyone who reads this will cherish who they have a whole lot more. Keep up the good work

Posted 4 Months Ago


When someone shares their innermost thoughts and
feelings with you... it stays with you... you have
become more than you can be... and yet you have
evolved into a new person who knows loss, but has gained
a persona for all eternity. truly, Pat

Posted 5 Months Ago


MOON

5 Months Ago

thank you , will stop by Pat.
A very beautiful poem and your final two lines states exactly how I feel. Grief is a painful pathway to walk, but all that love will stay with you.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


That nothing dies when love is key
You are invisible but eternally with me...

this could be said as true love... the above lines :)
very beautifully done

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thank you , much appreciated
so much tenderness! lovely poem...
"You are invisible but eternally with me" - a beautiful image.

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
The last two lines are true and not sad. Being grateful for love even when it's gone is a maturity that some never achieve. Good on you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

He was precious, grateful for our time together.
MOON

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review.
Grief is a tough thing to go through. It was for me and they'll be more in the near future.

The last two lines here are so appropriate and meaningful to read.

Great dedication Moon.

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thank you , kind Sir always good to hear from you.
the memories will last forever

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Yes it does , miss the physical presence but better for knowing him.
Love the last two lines in this poem. It brings home the whole feeling of grief in this poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Deeply insightful--and truly lovely.
Profoundly touching, Moon!

Posted 2 Years Ago


MOON

2 Years Ago

Thank you kind sir, so good to see you around.

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