Eternity

Eternity

A Poem by MOON

Eternity

 Your grace is all I have now that you are gone
 I can see your face true love waiting to be reborn
 In the echoes, in the silence, in the dark
 I was shackled , you were the rainbows arc

 Grace is the heart that kept me from falling apart
Grace is in your stories your works of art
Grace walks with me through all time
Grace is the years you were all mine

 Love can flower on a barren plain
 Love can flower it has your name
 I can grieve for the loss of you
Yet you left vistas and a universal view

 That nothing dies when love is key
 You are invisible but eternally with me

© 2017 MOON


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Deeply insightful--and truly lovely.
Profoundly touching, Moon!

Posted 7 Years Ago


MOON

7 Years Ago

Thank you kind sir, so good to see you around.
beautiful write, especially the third stanza...favorite.

I have some people who are still with me, even though they are not.

they will always be..."invisible but eternally with me"

j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


MOON

7 Years Ago

Thanks Jacob always appreciate your comments
This is so beautifully woven. The recognition of the eternal in such a situation gives a soothing warmth, really liked this MOON :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


MOON

7 Years Ago

Thanks Poppy , will stop by soon take care.
There is grace in life, grace in love and grace in this heartfelt poem. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


MOON

7 Years Ago

Thank you Ted much appreciated.
Heartfelt sadness in this one. Gentle and tender emotions expressed beautifully. Sorry for your loss. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


MOON

7 Years Ago

Thank you Lydia , go well.
The beautiful sorrows flow so tenderly through your words, through your loss, through the lingering light of this everlasting love.

Posted 7 Years Ago


MOON

7 Years Ago

Thanks Craig always look forward to your comments. Take care my friend.
An owl on the moon

7 Years Ago

May your weekend bring you such peace.
You have discovered and beautifully portrayed timeless truth.
A gratifying read!

Posted 7 Years Ago


MOON

7 Years Ago

Thanks Jimmy truly appreciate your thoughts.
' You left vista's and a universal view', very nice. It was a pleasure reading your poem. Kind regards, I.I.

Posted 7 Years Ago


MOON

7 Years Ago

Thank you Isabella, will stop by soon.
Isabella Ivy

7 Years Ago

You are most welcome. And you are most welcome to visit :) I look forward to it! I.I.
I agree dear friend.
"Love can flower on a barren plain
Love can flower it has your name
I can grieve for the loss of you
Yet you left vistas and a universal view"
The above lines are true and thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 7 Years Ago


MOON

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your comments , you too kind.
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
I feel the loss and bereavement so gently expressed in each elegant verse. There is acceptance and a spiritual calm emanating from your words.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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