Precious

Precious

A Poem by MOON


Precious is the diamond in the rough 
You were my world , you my love
 In the darkest hours I always see
 A glimmer of light that allowed me to be

 The best in the heart of day
 The future that within lay 
The promise of the dawning hours 
The hope that within flowers  

A testament to your gentle soul
 You moulded pieces made it whole
 Said there is more you can be 
If you allow your mind to be free

 Find the voice that within lay
 Sing the harmony in your own play
 Never doubt you are the one to beat
 All your fears you alone defeat

 A lullaby yours alone 
You don't have to pick at a bone
 You are the promise you want to be
 Unchain yourself you will be free

 Love does not bind nor does it hold
 Instead all you are unfolds
 The warmth of another's love 
Raises you to the heavens above

 Find your peace in the mercy of you 
You are a grain of sand you are the worldview

© 2019 MOON


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me too, MOON....my best friend....she was such a gentle, loving soul....had problems with alcohol...fell asleep smoking...fire got enough of her...she lasted a week...but that was it...
she is now an angel looking down and looking after me..
i feel in the mercy of her.
she is free...

and your write is magnificent.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


MOON

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Jacob , will stop by soon.
Your poem reminds me of a best friend (RIP) of mine . . . he helped me see myself & life in a better way. Even tho he's been gone 4 years, I still often think of the things he taught me to boost my self-esteem & change the direction of my life. Your poem has a slight melancholy tone which leads me to feel it may be written about a situation that's in the past or no longer accessible . . . I feel some longing . . . your message is very palpable (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


MOON

5 Months Ago

thank you so much
There is something so painfully beautiful here. The story seems so personal, so intimate, and yet so vast... I was pulled into the core of the world... the peace... the pain. Wanting the lullaby to always play softly over the earth.

Posted 7 Months Ago


MOON

7 Months Ago

Thank you Craig most appreciated.
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Pax
finding peace within is as always a struggle yet it isn't impossible.... believing is still a key to it.. pax

Posted 8 Months Ago


MOON

7 Months Ago

Hi Pax , great to see you around will stop by soon
A perceptive, lyrical and, frankly, brilliant ode to someone clearly special.
Gratifying read, dear Moon.

Posted 8 Months Ago


MOON

7 Months Ago

Many thanks will stop by soon
You have undoubtedly written a precious gem of a poem. Many beautiful lines to quote. True statements too.

Posted 8 Months Ago


MOON

7 Months Ago

Thanks Sami , take care always good to see you drop by..
Sami Khalil

7 Months Ago

You are welcome. Take care.

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