Silenced

Silenced

A Poem by TheSecretWriter
"

Why? Not why you chose her over me but WHY did you never even tell me?

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Why? 

I saw you and her
Standing there
Holding hands and I pretended not to care! 

But on the inside
My heart just screamed.
Why is she your girlfriend
But you never see me? 

Later my head realised 
It  only would  cost more
To believe that your heart cared 
But my heart still was yours to the core. 

You act like a friend
But not a message contents
A word about another girl 
Now I don't trust you, don't give me a whirl.

© 2014 TheSecretWriter


Author's Note

TheSecretWriter
After a long, long time I am finally back with a poem I just excaved out of the deeps of my desk. I hope you like it,
Rate and Review, as always.
Thanks for everything,
LG,
The Secret Writer

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I liked the message in this poem...it was so full of emotion. I kind of found the rythm a bit hard to read around...but that might just be me. Great job working the emotions so well in your work! Keep writing!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheSecretWriter

9 Years Ago

First: thank you for your comment and I know that the rhythm is kind of mixed up. :D Thank you again.. read more

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Added on December 22, 2014
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TheSecretWriter
TheSecretWriter

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Hello. What to tell you? I am not from Great Britain or the USA but from Germany, so please excuse my grammar and spellings. My hobbies are, besides writing, reading (good foundation for being a.. more..

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