Insane Normalcy

Insane Normalcy

A Poem by Ki
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Don't know how I even wrote this...

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All these people going someplace

Do they hear the screams of pain, even of joy?

Run on with our repititious agendas

If it were all end, would it matter?

If I am lucky, who are the poor unfortunate souls?

Whos is to answer these questions

With all these people going someplace

Pulling me into your mundane normalcy

Is this where I'm wanted?

Where I want to be?

You won't soothe my pain

What do you have to offer me?

With all these people going someplace

Does a drop in the bucket compare?

Insignificant,

Useless,

But not where it matters

To me

 

© 2010 Ki


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Ki
Argh... people laugh at the title

Posted 11 Years Ago


beautiful, Maddy! To me, the rythem was a little off, but all in all, wonderful write!
I rate thee 100!!! I'd rate 120, but it son't let me do that D-=

Posted 11 Years Ago


great poem! keep writing! love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Another beautiful poem, it has such emotion inside. I'm not too much of a reviewer, but I'll continue reading your works. Very nice job, keep on writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Don't worry too much about spelling errors.
This write is great!
I feel that the strongest part was;
"All these people going someplace
Do they hear the screams of pain, even of joy?
Run on with our repetitious agendas
If it were all end, would it matter?"
Excellent work!

-Elissa :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Oops spelling error...

Posted 11 Years Ago



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