Nightmare

Nightmare

A Poem by Ki
"

Dream to nightmare...

"

Dreaming

Bliss happiness

Only pure goodness

All is right with the world

 

Waking up

Just one thing

Can awake

And the wrong begins again

 

Torture filled

Suffering

That Can't be stopped

Pain to All

 

Waking up

is not

Waking up

It's a nightmare.

© 2010 Ki


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I know just what you mean in this piece, there are times when my dreams look so much better than the real world...but, that's the whole point of dreaming isn't it? lol I have had dreams that I wanted to escape from though. Very nice job on this, I enjoyed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love the last stanza, very powerful, overall it's short and neat to read which puts more emphasis on your words - well expressed and well written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Actually inspired bu waking up from a good dream...

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Added on March 26, 2010
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