Can She be Understood?

A girl

on the outside

funky

eccentric

confident

she lets no one bother her

she loves life

 

A girl on the inside

deep

dark

sensitive

can a girl this misunderstood

bw known?

Reviews

[Crusaderscross]

This poem is quite clear on who the subject is actually. A mixture of inside and outside would best, but almost impossible. We are understood only by people we let understand us.

[Ki]

Lovely error, right at the end

[Olivia Ashley]

I love it!

[Alexis]

Aw I like this poem. Good job!!! :D