Regret yesterday and scared today

Regret yesterday and scared today

A Poem by davescotland

We had play dough now need dough to play
Take care of our teeth and let our minds decay
Paper planes became plastic drones
Stretching it out became pay day loans
Live for likes but don't like how we live
Have more than we need and not enough to give

© 2015 davescotland


Author's Note

davescotland
Seem to spend a great deal of time thinking just now and writing things makes sense. Poem is off the cuff and not edited,is thought of in more or less the time it takes me to scribble them.

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really lovely poem, i like how the latter cancels out the hope in the former in each sentence, awesomely written

Posted 8 Years Ago


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davescotland

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words and taking the time.

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davescotland
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