Stairway to Heaven

Stairway to Heaven

A Poem by Macy A. Brown

The day I got the message

My heart split in half.

All the message said was this,

 

"Dean has been shot in the chest at war and will not be returning home to you"

 

As I packed up your things,

tears dripped all over the floor.

The concept of you not returning was to much.

 

But I had to remember,

You took the stairway to heaven and you are watching over me,

Once I die you will come down that stairway and,

we shall meet again.

 

 

© 2011 Macy A. Brown


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This reminds me of Carrie Underwood's song "Just A Dream". This was very beautiful and sad. You did a very good job writing it. Keep up the good work.!

Posted 11 Years Ago


good poem but it needs more empathy and feeling. it helps when its actually happened to you. sad poems are tough to fake

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very beautiful! I thought it was sad but very well written. Good job! I enjoyed it! (Your brother knows I say this a lot but...) Keep on writing!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I love to write of course! That's why I am on here. I am writing a new book named, "Christmas Morning" It's my first one and I come out with about two to three chapters a day. I love to play baseba.. more..

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