Chapter (36) A LIFE JOURNEY

A LIFE JOURNEY

"BAR

CHATTED

DRINKS

KISSED

LOVED

MARRIED

CHILDREN

AGED

ALONE

BAR"

Author's Note

A BIT DIFFERENT THIS ONE. ANY COMMENTS PLEASE.

Reviews

[Marie]

A path of 10 steps, from bar to bar...
I like this form.

[Frieda P]

I'm loving these 10 word poems, it's amazing what can be said in so few, an entire life passed before mine eyes.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you. I'm just waiting for the muse to come back so that I can write more.

[Frieda P]

I think you exhausted her yesterday...

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I just had an inspiration this morning. I've sent you a read request. Hope you'll give me an honest comment, as always.

[Frieda P]

Honestly, if I really don't like it, I don't review it, unlike some people around this loony bin....

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I too have stopped commenting on ones I don't like. many ask for honest comments but don't want anything negative. for me I trust you to tell me the truth, good OR bad. otherwise how will I get better.

[Frieda P]

A critique is one thing, none of us expect everyone to adore our poetry....I meant if it really doesn't do it for me, I'll just move along, no sense in bursting someone's bubble, we all have our own perceptions of poetry and different tastes.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

That is so true. I'm so new to poetry, that much of the work I'm asked to read is way out of my scope. Guess that's why I pick on punctuation and too much on the content.

[Frieda P]

For me it's more of a 'feel', like music, if it moves me, then it's all good....

[Michael Stevens]

Sums up an entire life in just a few words; "Just the facts ma'am! "Excellent!

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you for reading. I wasn't sure if I'd gone too far away from my usual style.

[rach]

The circle of life, or a life I should say.
Interesting. Refreshingly different.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Thank you for reading. I wasn't sure if it worked as I'd imagined it. I wanted to see how few life events could still be a meaningful life.

[Michael Stevens]

I thought it worked beautifully!