Unknowing To Your Affects

Day fades

Moments of silence embellished

The color cakes the ocean like dried paint

On an easel represented by serenity

A mix of spring and summer

But appreciated throughout all seasons

A worldly sign of a days end

Able to bring peace

Even if but a brief moment

Through chaotic shadows

One may seek solace regardless

Like the will of the fearless

Moments of faith and happiness

Or the bliss of momentary triumphs

It's warmth will return

That familiar color that fills eyes

As if synchronizing with your very soul

Bathing you in amenity

Though just in a days work

It travels alone unknowing of it's great deeds

Reviews

[Wuji]

It's more than a song, it's a moment of realization - that has a powerful meaning. The piece has lines that seem to unite the imagery in a most peculiar and aesthetic fashion making it more original.

1. On an easel represented by serenity
2. Moments of silence embellished
3. Bathing you in amenity

Highly artistic, you show a fine poetic touch.

[Riding the Rainbow]

really good piece...........

[Karla Mata Soto]

Awww. Someone sounds like they're in love! I wonder who it is!

[Scott Mou]

This poem is so.....poetic! I don't know how to describe it but it's good! My favorite line is Through chaotic shadows
One may seek solace regardless