Shallow and Cold

Shallow and Cold

A Poem by The Mad Prophet
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Just a little thought twist, not a very strong one.

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Run, run now as far as you can
Run, and don’t ever look back
Run, and make no attempt to see
The horror you brought to yourself
 
Scream, scream for your life
Scream, and be heard to all
Scream, and make no attempt to stop
For that may be your only hope
 
I see no future in your soul
I see no life in your eyes
Not like the life I have seen
 
I am starting to feel
The one emotion I fear
If my mind can’t rationalize this thought
Then I will surely fall victim to you
 
And for once, maybe I should…

© 2008 The Mad Prophet


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I actually think this is a very strong poem. Your words are strenth
in themselves. There is darkness, yet there is power. You command
when you write. You put your whole self out there when you write,
leaving yourself vulnerable, like most of us do. We become who we are
when we write, no hiding. This is one of my favorites of yours:).

AD

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This deception it's so strong and so cold.. makes me want to get some hot water all over me... love the expression on this feeling

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I actually think this is a very strong poem. Your words are strenth
in themselves. There is darkness, yet there is power. You command
when you write. You put your whole self out there when you write,
leaving yourself vulnerable, like most of us do. We become who we are
when we write, no hiding. This is one of my favorites of yours:).

AD

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem. A little twist on love i am guessing.

i like how the color fades, a good effect.

love the picture you chose for it too. Go WoD!

cole-

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I always like taking the next big step through my mind. I am always trying to overcome something as simple as feelings over something. Ether it be good or bad, I try to adapt to it just to push it f.. more..

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