Shed me your Skin

Shed me your Skin

A Poem by The Mad Prophet
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Something else to write. Kind of Doppelganger ish.

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From the brain to the stem
One Scale or flakes of skin
Show me your truth
Show me you
 
Burn the path
Take control of your life
Lead it to me
Let me see
 
This is the time for change
Bend your mind
Free your will
Bleed into me
 
Shed me no tears
Just shed me your skin
 
Do you even need it anymore?

© 2008 The Mad Prophet


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Like an onion and the different layers. I really liked this way of describing the ways we hide ourselves, emotions, but once you get to the last layer you find the truth. Nicely written. =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, this is straight up powerful and commanding. I agree with AD. Your expressions pull no punches.

"This is the time for change
Bend your mind
Free your will
Bleed into me

Shed me no tears
Just shed me your skin. Do you even need it anymore?" ~ This right here is terrific. I love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this MP. It's dark, raw, and makes one think..who are we really...
does our soul linger, are we really in control of ourselves.

This is a really good poem..AD

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what a powerful and wonderful statement

"Shed me no tears
Just shed me your skin"

Love these verses

~R

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The Mad Prophet
The Mad Prophet

Cedar Falls, IA



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I always like taking the next big step through my mind. I am always trying to overcome something as simple as feelings over something. Ether it be good or bad, I try to adapt to it just to push it f.. more..

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