Drowning

Drowning

A Poem by RastaChiko™
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July 5th, 2011.

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Brutal, shaking.

Sinking, slipping.

 

On a ship.

Dying, dying.

Falling, slipping.

 

Crashing, crying.

Dying, dying.

 

Sinking, shaking.

Brutal attack.

Falling, falling.

 

Screaming, fighting.

Trying, trying.

 

Explosions, movement.

Crying, trying.

 

Floating, floating.

Clawing, screaming.

 

Helpless, floating.

Sinking, dying.

© 2012 RastaChiko™


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As someone who spent time in the water this weekend, I sure am glad I had an air tank on my back after reading this. :) It leaves a desperate feeling. One, I am sure you intended. Well done.

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RastaChiko™
RastaChiko™

Flaming O's Records, MA



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I could tell my parents hated me. My bath toys were a toaster and a radio. My name is Heather. I'd rather be called something more creative. I am seventeen, turning a sweet eighteenth in January. I.. more..

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