Let go

Let go

A Poem by LadyT

When I saw your name on my phone my heart skiped a beat and my knees weakened. 
It's been a year and you are happy with someone else and still I am sorry for how we ended.
You were an angel and I wanted to make you leave like everybody else by hurting you where I thought you most delicate.
My panic made me treat you poorly and I did things I never though I would.
After everything should be wiser and just get you out of my mind.
Smiling and satisfied is the only way I want you to be.
Countless times I replayed the memory of our last kiss that ended up against the wall.
Picked up the phone. Hope nobody gets hurt. Hope nobody falls.
I just can not let go.

© 2019 LadyT


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It is hard to let go, no matter who or what or how it ended.
This is plain and simple, I like the uncomplicated style.
Mine ended, I fell.

Posted 3 Months Ago


LadyT

3 Months Ago

Thank you!
Sorry to hear that. Same here.
on the second to last line you forgot the R in hurt, I like this, I feel like I do the same thing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LadyT

3 Months Ago

Thank you! I like the fact that I‘m not alone.
WeakFreak

3 Months Ago

Never.
No problem.

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Added on March 17, 2019
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