I am tired

its generally distribing the way we face challenges and wish to abandon them when we feel we can't face them.Not knowing that they are actually suppose to be our stepping stone for success.

I am tired

if you were to to be ,

I am the forsaken I think -

be me for one not two sec

shall you stay I think,

it is the world of apartheid its self

not the people in it, i think,

the day will down

not even with not problems

my had is filled with -

i'll be, i'll see i'll, i'll do

with challenges it's filled with,

the middle i always go for'

easy it is,i'll see

for it postpones the challenge,

for thoughts in my mind

I am in my own world ,

like an owl living in its own world

 seen at night, durring the day its rare,

like jonah he was tired too

thee wrong One he was ,

in the shark for days,

they down with no food

in times I think

forsaken is my surname

and challenge is my world

I am tired

its a miracle, the world is its self

dedication it demands

I am when I realised,

for only my effort differed,

I became the mouth they hold - 

i'm the reason

to mend some they seek,

 i'm succesfull after I ralised

for seasons change I shall seek nor wormth

for reasons we shall seek triumph,

only with three words I was changed

on the day I realised

for long I say,so as I stay,

ignorent for imortality tired keeps it

in my brain I shall not succeed,

one day down with me,no more tired ever

I am tired,but of being a failure.

Author's Note

Well poems are writen in any how but that does not mean we don't go wrong.An error is an error please if you see something tell me don't think its still my style of writing.

Reviews

[BLACK PRINCE]

I like it.
It's unique.
The structure really gives it a tired feel
which is the concept of the poem.

WELL DONE