I once again fall in love.

I once again fall in love.

A Poem by Magdelena
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To turn back the hands of time. Oh how lovely that would be...

"
 
 
The wind, soft as a feather, moves
Eyes closed, I inhale
The richness as it passes
My cheeks feel its soft caress
Like a lovers kiss, gently it touches
And I smile.

Raindrops start to fall slowly
Face upturned, I let the drops touch me
The smell intoxicating to my senses
It overtakes all of me, I indulge in its richness
The feeling exquisite, divine, and I grasp it close
Letting it overtake all of me deep within
And I gently sigh.

Oh the feeling of freedom
The purity of the breeze softly passing by
The feel of the rain as it touches my body
The wetness soaking me, lapping at my form
Like the arms of a lover that touches oh so gently
Eyes closed, Senses bare, I fall into its passion.

 

And gently float away...

 

Memories,

Of once upon a time

Passes my view

I inhale all its richness

For all still lies deeply within me.

 
Eyes closed, I feel the rain pour down on me
Oh the sweet joy.
The richness of splendor that comes forth
I bask in it
Holding my arms out
Towards all it offers.
 
For you are there my love.
 
Always..
 
Inside those sweet, sweet, raindrops.
Each one marking the memories from within
Bringing them forward yet once again

Yes...
 
For you are there my love...

Always..

Forever to hold deep inside
Within my heart, I savor each precious moment
Till it is time that I say goodbye.

Your touch of sweet to always linger.
Your scent deep within
Always still felt
Funny how time fades certain memories.

Yet with you, they seem to linger forever
Like the raindrops sweetly falling
The mist of pure that slowly trickles down my skin
And to this I say
Let them fall..

Yes my love...
Let them fall.
 
 And slowly,
Oh so slowly..

I once again fall in love.

© 2014 Magdelena


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Very beautiful! Nice images I see here. :)

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Posted 11 Years Ago


a very marvellous and heartfelt read

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Posted 12 Years Ago


This was such an amazing poem!! It was soft, tender, and it was very rich!! There was a lot of imagery, and it just added to the whole poem!! The use of rain was just fabulous, for there is nothing better than the feel and smell of rain. It flowed magnificantly, and it was just beautiful. Absolutely lovey and fabulous. Beautiful job, absolutely beautiful.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Great write! Heartfelt!

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Posted 13 Years Ago



Nothing quite so emotion enducing as a gentle rain; no harmful bites, or annoying nibbles, but the spreading of droplets, far outreaching their minutia. You've brought this metaphor to life with your poem. So real one might find the ending to be a moment too soon.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


Indulging in the richness of love is divine indeed. It is so easy to fall in love with the same person over and over again and each time it deepens in strength, particularly if you are apart for any reason.
This is truly magical Mags, you have stretched out your arms and embraced the essence of true love...
*Tears* (Too close to home)
XXXXOOOOXXXX

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Posted 13 Years Ago


what a soft and tender composition of love and alluring fondness.

What a perfect read for this howling wet night... I think the heavens read your words dear poetess, as they are playing them out where earth meets sky...

Wonderful.
Antonio

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Posted 13 Years Ago


Very beautiful write. :)

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Posted 13 Years Ago


This is such a beautiful write! Its kind of inspiring!

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Posted 13 Years Ago



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