Twin Flames

A poem for our love in life.

Candles lighted my book ago,

but fire's lit cease at a wind blow

breaking my fire when candle's drip

praying for my true twin flame's lit.

Blissful when GOD lit my twin flame

satisfied no more funny game.

I can't read my book without it

praying for my true twin flame's lit.

No matter how hard wind may blow

nor other dainty candles glow

my fire's heat only to one lit

praying for my true twin flame's lit.

Candle's light has infinite bright

With true eternal Twin Flame's lit.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

A bit confusing of a write here... the word "lit" was just hard to read that many times in the verse... Took me away from the feel and flow of this one...

[Alvin Williard Aspuria Aquino]

You have a good point there, I might have to revise those a bit.