Three Promises

Three Promises

A Poem by Rose Tyler
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On the spot; A wolf's poem

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Waiting for the bird to crow
She howls at the moon
Her aura aglow
Her logic will she forego

Running wild through the trees
Hearing her name from within the dark 
Her pads skim the ground with ease
The silence rings with her bark

Blind with passion
Scared with thought
Her downfall will be their compassion
And her need to never get caught

Within the trees she sees
The Angel, the Wolf, and the Lover
Their sight brings her unease
But one day who she needs, she will discover

For now she shall suffer
Until she knows who
Until she is tougher
Then her passions will subdue

One promises passion
One promises lust
Those promises leave her ashen
For now she has their trust 

The final pact
The promise of life
They leave her intact
But if found out, there will be much strife 

© 2010 Rose Tyler


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This is amazing, it really is. I like your style
your words just flow.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is friggin amazing. I loved the images I got in my head when I was reading it. This was deep and captivating and... just, wow!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like the format to your poems. Very colorful and nice. The poem is great too though.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nature is such an interesting place. Much more so than the sanctuaries made by man. Animals can be much more sensual than humans. This poem seems to flow more like verse. I have little to be critical of.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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