Lost In Between

Lost In Between

A Poem by ♥ Malii Boo ♥
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Past relationship. Hope its good , a little nervous.

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I had you within grasp,
You could've been mine forever,
But I lost hope and broke your heart,
Now I don't know where to start,
I'm stuck I between sorry and
I love you.

© 2012 ♥ Malii Boo ♥


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aww this is super sweet! Great poem! I can understand what you are going through. its sad but if they cant see how amazing you are,,, they arnt worth your time :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Really sad but emotional too, and I can definitely relate to this. This is well written, and I hope things get better for ya soon. Kudos

100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

♥ Malii Boo ♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you sooo much my other poem thing 'Agent StudMuffin' continues the story :) if you really like.. read more
The Watcher

7 Years Ago

Oh okay, and you're very welcome! =)
Beautiful, how sad. I loved the last lines though :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

♥ Malii Boo ♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you :) i wanted there to be flow and wa la I came up with those lines
awwww ....good work and keep writing

Posted 7 Years Ago


♥ Malii Boo ♥

7 Years Ago

thank you soo much :)
Really good job!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

♥ Malii Boo ♥

7 Years Ago

Thanks :)
nice job really captures the emotion and i can relate. awesome

Posted 7 Years Ago


♥ Malii Boo ♥

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you guys like it :)
Harley (arbiter)

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you wrote it. It's good
Really good and speaks truth. love it!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


♥ Malii Boo ♥

7 Years Ago

awh thank you :D
Bye Guys

7 Years Ago

your welcome :)
♥ Malii Boo ♥

7 Years Ago

:)
awww This is Bittersweet... more on the sweet side. Lovely write. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


♥ Malii Boo ♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you
So true, so good. Excellent write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


♥ Malii Boo ♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you
short and to the point, i know this in and now, because, i feeling "stuck between sorry and i love you" good work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

♥ Malii Boo ♥

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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♥ Malii Boo ♥
♥ Malii Boo ♥

Neptune!!!, United Kingdom



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i am Skylii's sister (♥ Skylar Bay ♥)! i love listening to music (Blink 182, Scarlet O'Hara, Never shout Never, 30 Seconds To Mars, Teen Hearts, Etc.) I don't write very often but when i.. more..

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