It's Time To Do

This poem is about a reality that time never comes back after it was gone from your hand...

It's time to
wake up,
It's time to do
whatever you want to do.
It's time to
make you strong yourself
as much as possible you can.

The time is like
sand
if you hold sand
in your hand
then your grip is losing
the whole sand
is losing of your hand
and that sand never comes back
like that way
as it was
when you hold
the sand first time.
Like that the time never
comes back
like that way
you want.

So, remember the time
is the most valuable
thing in the world.
Those people achieve
this worthiest thing
When he do all his
works in time,
he never waste his time
and he respect his time...

Author's Note

This poem is relate in this days. In modern days people didn't have time to thought about all of this...

Reviews

[Riddhi]

This is really nice poem and the theme is really nice..You know you expressed your main message very nicely and the sand example..I especially liked it..The way you related it with time was phenomenal...But the only thing which i think was lacking was that it sounded more as a speech than as a poem..It was lacking that flow of poem you know that flow of words...But overall it was nice..
I hope next time i will get to see the flow of poem also alongwith a strong message..
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing...
Take care
Riddhi

[Mamta Sonowal]

Thank for ur appreciation... n I remember all tht what u say n I will try my best next time...😊😊😊