Indestructible

 

 

They can never destroy us!

We are made of music...

that can never be beaten.

It emptys itseft into the souls of the weak,

and gives them the strength

to conquer all their enemys.

and helps them get through the toughest situations.
  one day we all will rise

and destroy the world

with hatred, and pleaser

they can never beat us

because we are idestructible

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[BenightedWhispers]

This is really nice. You might want to check your rythmn, and " and helps them get through the toughest situations", you might want to take care of that somehow. It doesn't have a place yet in the poem. Great job on it though.