1,2,3

1,2,3

A Poem by Amanda-Bodanda

The numbers i see around me, are counting the times you say 'i love you',

mutiply by ten and thats a life time.

1, 2, 3,

Don't stop now!

I love you too!

Quit your shouting love and continue on.

The numbers i see around me, are...decreasing?

I LOVE YOU TOO!

Open your ears babe...get your calculater out and start mutipling!

The numbers i see around you are the times i say "i love you too...."

where are my numbers?

© 2009 Amanda-Bodanda


Author's Note

Amanda-Bodanda
ignore grammar problems...

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Nicely penned. Keep Writing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


i agree with michael, it does make u ponder love...nice one amanda!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


this is unique, clever and romantically inclined to draw the reader to ponder love. great job

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 6, 2009

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Hi, My name is Amanda...i wright small poems....i dont like reading long ones unless it captures me! so i wont wright long ones for you! but enjoy my small wrightings!! more..

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