Lies

A girl that lied... She didnt know how to tell the truth or how to show how she felt. Everyone thought she was ok... but really she was in pain.

Its all just a lie

I am hiding from the truth

Afraid to show how I feel

Nobody knows I miss him

Or that I am still deeply in love

The only thing they know are lies

They think I am ok with this

They dont know I cry

That I have restless nights

My life is like a nightmare

The sun no longer shines

Its so dark and I'm all alone

I am afraid...

My heart broken

I am in pain...

I continue to wipe the tears away

My face dry and looking hopeless

They dont know that I still have pictures of him

That I look at them over and over again

Trying to comfort myself

Nobody is here

And nobody knows

That everything I said

Was all just a lie

 

Reviews

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

This is full of heartbreak, yet it is such a beautiful poem.
Keep up the excellent work!

-Elissa :D

[Tate Morgan]

Excellent

[Ashley]

Really quite sad and beautiful. Very incredibly relatable. Every girl knows how this feels, to be alone and heartbroken. And thinking absolutly nobody cares. I love it :) Well done!

[Jason]

Once again, great work....Lies, lies, lies....do they do any good? Sometimes maybe, depending on the situation....but considering the direction you took in this....the lies only hid what she wanted seen....and although it appears that she didn't want the truth to be known, she really did....she was just lost about how to go about it...
Now, as far as the art itself. Excellent. You capture the emotion to a T! And I can totally relate, being a victim of my own preaching....and a victim of hiding behind my own lies at times...
Your words are far beyond your years...., and your writing is of a brilliance in itself. Excellent job.

Jay

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

this spoke for itself, well expressed and all.
it made me tear up =)
you are a fantastic writer and i wish you the best on all your work!
i can't wait to read what you come up with next!

[Seeker]

Okay. I'm gonna say it flat out: This poem made me cry. The rhythm is consistent;
Very eloquent, beautifully expressed, and once again I can perfectly relate. Excellent job!

[deeps]

This is so sad and so full of pain,
Very well written though and well expressed!

[Wolfe Greytome]

When I said that you have a softer side that would elevate your writing to a whole new level, this is what I was talking about. Very well done.