He Loves Me

He loves her so much. He ends all her pain and brings the joy into her. They fall in love with each other =) Its the end of all her misery and a new beginning for a new relationship =)

I dont feel alone anymore

The tears have stopped falling

And its all because of you

You opened me up

And healed my broken heart

You stood by my side until all the pain was gone

And the last tear drop fell from my face

You never let go of my hand

You held me tightly in your arms

Comforting me and my soul

As you stand there holding me

You bring your gaze to mine

Staring into each others eyes

He took his figure and rub my precious cheeks

Then he slowly moved in to kiss me

Gently he pressed his warm moist lips to mine

His mouth tasted so sweet as he kissed me

I knew then and there

That I was your one and only

And you loved me

And you were never going to leave

Reviews

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

this gives me a feeling of hope when i read that this guy is so kind hearted to this girl instead of some sick jerk on a drive to get some.
excuse my crude terms but i love how you have heroes and failures in you writing.
Nice job.

Love is awesome...gives me the feeling ive never had before...this is beautiful

[Brandon]

True love is a wonderful thing. Great write!

[Star Shyne]

I have never experienced falling in love yet, but i can tell you that this poem has let me feel the feeling of love more than i've ever felt before. Wonderful poem.

[Jason]

Longing into the depths of love....dreaming into the greatest dream possible.....Such a brilliant and most delightful work of art, that captures the purest forms of love... Excellent work!

Jay

[Wolfe Greytome]

This feels kinda surreal to me. Kinda like dream that the speaker doesn't want to awaken from. Quite a terrific piece.

[deeps]

This is a wonderful heartfelt write, I can feel the sadness in this.
As well as a longing.

[Jess.]

Well done, I can feel the happiness, and love in this.
Good piece =)