I Dont Want To Say Goodbye

A girl is forced to say goodbye to him... when he as to move. She is so sad because he knows that when hes gone nothing will be the same... All the pain will come back. And she will be left to stand all alone, with her shadow.

I dont want to say goodbye

I dont want you to go

I dont want to leave this love behind

But I cant stop you from leaving

And saying goodbye

When you leave me

All be all alone again

I wont have you to love anymore

I wont be able to taste your sweet kisses

I wont have you to comfort me when I am so alone

Ill have nothing left of you

Except some memories of our past

I dont want to cry all over again

I dont want to go back to the suffering

Or the restless nights...

I dont want to have to miss you

I just want you to stay

I want to be able to love you

I wish you understood how much I love you

I wish you knew how much this is killing me

And how pissed I am at you

Because your moving far away

Away from me

Away from our love

And everything we ever had

I hate that you love me

But not enough to stay

Not enough to keep on loving me

I really dont want to say goodbye

Because all the tears that you wiped away

Will just fall to the ground

Along with my broken heart

It will be the end

Of our love

Goodbye will come

And all be all alone

Again...

With nobody to love

Because we had to let go

And say goodbye

Author's Note

I hope this is ok... mite need some work. took me a while to write. But it is true... and his happening to me right now.

Reviews

[Jason]

I really feel the pain in this work...., a true capture of how painful it is to say goodbye, before one is ready. A delightful read that makes the heart do the thinking for the mind. Excellent!

[Brandon]

Quite the sad piece. Strong feelings and emotions in this piece. Nice Job.

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

it's really hard not to cry when you read the words you write. Your so honest that it makes me feel sad that you feel this way. I enjoy your writing and relating to all your pain.
Other people understand how you feel so write on!

[*molly]

aww, it breaks mah heartt =[ very nice

[Satellite Heart]

I love it. I can relate. I miss him, and some advice to you. I'd like to say that empty feeling will go away but it never really has for me yet. He didn't really leave but a part of him left, you know. I hope everything works out, I really loved this poem. Great Work!

[Star Shyne]

Wonderful poem. It is filled with great emotion. good job. keep it up~

[PaperHearts]

This was such an emotionally driven write. I could tell that you put a lot of yourself into this piece, which I definitely appreciate. I liked the story which underlined this piece, and thought that you described the sense of anger and helplessness really well. I also liked the way you ended the poem, as it felt like a kind of resolution, despite however painful that might be.
~PaperHearts

[deeps]

Such a sad write here, I can feel the emotion in this.
Very well expressed write!

[Jess.]

So sad :(
But it's very well written, you expressed your emotions so well...I could feel them as I read along.
Awesome poem!
I hope things get better for you soon....

[Wolfe Greytome]

This is an EXCELLENT piece.