Day After Day

The days go on... Such torture not being able to see him.

Everyday without you
Is another day lost

Day after day
I write to you
Waiting to get a response

The time waiting
Is pure torture
And I cant stand it

My heart aches for you
And wishes to be with you

If only I could see you
And to be held in your arms

Maybe then I would be ok
Maybe I wouldn't miss you so much

But I guess I wont know till I see you
Until your here with me

I guess Ill just have to keep writing
Day after day
Waiting for you to respond

Until you're with me
Forever and always

Author's Note

I dont care about flow, grammar or any typos for that matter. If you are going to rate it low... I would prefer criticism then a rating please thanks!

Reviews

[Chloe Christine]

LOVE.
I've reviewed like, ten of your poems tonight,
and I've loved every single one.
You're an amazing writer, honestly.
With your talent, you don't need flow,
you don't even need grammar to understand what you're saying.
your poems paint such a great picture in my head.
you inspire me. (:

100/100. because you're an amazing writer.

[MusicJunkie66]

You describe love and how it feels to be away from your one and only really well =)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very simple plea for one you obviously love... it is hard when they don't respond and leave you hanging on to hope.