Missing Him

I miss him so much. Its been so long since I felt or loved the way I loved with him!

I lay there
Missing you...

I miss seeing your big brown eyes
And that pretty smile

I miss the feeling
When you kissed me

I miss the warmth
Of your hugs

But mostly
I just miss you

I cant help but think of you
Each and everyday of my life

You're everything to me
And its hard living without you

You're locked inside of me
My heart wont let go

All our memories
Are trapped inside my head

They haunt me
Each and every night

Oh how I miss you
And long for you

I've been waiting
For months

I know my time will come
And we'll meet again

And everything I ever missed
Will soon be with me again.

I miss you
And I'll always love you

Author's Note

I dont know about this. I felt like venting some more. But I feel like it doesnt make sense. Tell me what you think! Thanks

Reviews

[Chloe Christine]

One thing, you're desricptive. I love that.
-I miss seeing your big brown eyes

it paints a picture in your headd.
Again, good job. (:
writer's like you are why I actually read my read requests. (:

[deadly healer]

omg. tear. it made me think of this guy i fell in love with and never got to tell him i loved him. its a sad poem.

[PaperHearts]

Aww, such a heartbreaking poem! You expressed your emotions well in this piece, and I could really feel the longing and desire behind your words. I felt like you captured these complex emotions in the most simplest form; 'I miss you/And I'll always love you'. :) Nice write,
~PaperHearts

[JenLyn]

Seriously this made me so sad, it reminds me of a great friendship that I had that ended for very stupid reasons. I miss him so much and there isn't a day that goes by that I don't think about him or wonder what he's doing. I loved it because I can really relate to it. I hope this was just something you wrote and that you're not experiencing the same situation as me because it sucks. Anyway, keep up the good work. :)

[NoAirToBreatheXSuffocat..]

so beautiful, i really like ur writing!

[MusicJunkie66]

very-well expressed, great job :]

[deeps]

So full of deep emotions. I can feel the hurt.
I like this, very well expressed

[Star Wolf]

It hurts, that's for sure. It just hurts.

[Tina Kline]

This is wonderful in expressing the pain and longing for the one you love.

[kayla garcia]

i love it alot it's great