Everyday

I dont know what it is but I am crazy for him! I cant stop thinking about him! I dont know what it is but I think I am in love.

Every day
I think of you
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Every hour
I long for you
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Every minute
I miss you
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but, Every second
I breath for you
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And its all because
I love you

Author's Note

OK, so right now this is how I feel and I needed to vent. I know its short and probably doesnt mean or say much, but I dont know. I am sorry if you do not like it. It is the shortest I have ever written, but I needed to write this out. I dont care about grammar and flow either. If you dont like this then dont rate. Opinions and advice are allowed! Thanks!

Reviews

[JenLyn]

This was cute, short and to the point and unlike most love poems because it showcases the positive side of love while most love poems are about heartbreak and longing for someone, this seems happy to me and that you're actually in love rather than lust but that's just my interpretation. Overall a nice write. Keep it up! :)

[Haifa]

Short, simple and nice poem. Thanks for sharing.
Well done,
Haifa

[Scarlet Pulse]

I love this short poem. It's really powerful in short words. I think the last two lines aren't necessary. That's just my opinion, but I did enjoy it.

[deeps]

This is amazing, so much love here.
What a wonderful read.
A write so very heartfelt.

[rockinmiley555]

i really can relate to this. its great :D i really like the end "and its all because i love you" there is so much truth in that line. it makes the poem! great job ♥

[*Kantola*]

Oh man, sometimes the fewer words you use say the most to the reader. :) This was fantastic!!!
The bold woke up my eyes (i just woke up from a nap, but that's not the only reason!). I like how the bolded words are all important things, aka increments of time and "I LOVE YOU." This was a sweet poem :) It made me smile and think of someone. *dreamy sigh!*
I LOVE IT!!! :D

[Jamie Taylor]

I LOVE IT!

[MissWordSmith]

now see, THIS is a poem :) keep it up girl, this was nice.

[kayla garcia]

i like it but i think you could add on to it cause it seems like you got alot of feelings for him or her

[MusicJunkie66]

Excellent, short, sweet, and to the point! =)

[Havatara]

I like short! Short is always good because well, it takes less time to read, but there isn't as much useless drivel in short poems. Also, just because it's short doesn't mean it doesn't say anything. I think it's perfect.