Live, Laugh, Love

Live, Laugh, Love

A Poem by Manda
"

We live, laugh, and always love! Hes everything to me!

"
Together
We live for each other
 
Together
We laugh at one another

But together
We love
forever


© 2010 Manda


Author's Note

Manda
Just another short poem. I guess its like others but I feel like its different. I needed to vent some more. I kinda like the shortness of poems. I feel like it gives it a stronger meaning to things. I thought about saying, Together we live, laugh and love but I thought it would ruin it. What do you think? Anyways hope you like it! Rate and give advice! Trying to still raise my status! Thanks =)

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A beautiful short poem. The words are true. When two people live together. Better know laughter and love. Will need both to keep a relationship alive and strong. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


short, sweet, and too the pint.
adorable. nice :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is really cute. It just reminds those moments you have together just the two and have those special moments. Well thats what I think when I read this. It really means a lot when you think about it. Thank-you for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


It's cute. Short and sweet at the same time. Even though it's short when you're reading it you can remember sooo much. The memories are awesome. Great job. keep it up.


Posted 9 Years Ago


I like how poetry is a reduction of sorts, and I like the simplistic style of your poem. However, it kinda reads like a hallmark card, which isn't a terrible thing, but it could be better. Live, laugh, love is a common phrase, and a reduction in and of itself. Anyways, keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very true! Nice job

Posted 9 Years Ago


so perfect. so true.

Posted 9 Years Ago


sooooooo true!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awww! I never would have thought of such a simple, yet amazing idea. Connecting the live, laugh, love phrase to a relationship. Beautiful poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice poem! I'm actually glad that you didn't write 'Together we live, laugh, and love'. :P I thought that this was so simple, yet so effective, and that you did a great job in summarising what it fundamentally means to be in love. :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 9 Years Ago



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