Oh God Please!

Just when I think I have found everything, God has to go and change things. I dont know what I want or even what I need. All I know is that I'm confused and supposedly falling in love

Oh God please
Dont do this to me

Just when I think
I have found the one

You have to go and
Change things around

I thought I knew
What exactly I wanted

What I needed
And loved most

But now...
Its all just a blur

Oh God please
Dont do this

I beg of you
Please dont

I cant have you
Playing with my heart

I am not capable
Of loving everyone

I especially cant be falling in love
With my very best friend

God its not possible
It just isnt

God please
I beg of you

I cant love him
Not when I already have

Author's Note

I have to vent. I have to write this out. I just dont know what to do! I cant be feeling this way! Especially with HIM! Oh dear lord! Well I hope you like this piece! And if you dont I am so sorry. I dont feel like this is one of my best pieces but I just needed to let it out... I dont know about the ending. It seems ok for now but I want to know what you think bout it. If you dont like it then dont rate! Please...! Just give your advice or comments! I am trying to raise my status! Thanks =)

Reviews

[kayla garcia]

i love it

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this poem. Thanks for sharing this. :D

[Luna Northstar]

wow, so beautiful. Great work!

[MissWordSmith]

wow...this was so great!!!!! and i can totally relate!! it was sarcastic and funny and you made something like this seem so important and you know what? it is!

I went through the same sorta thing once....read my poem My 'Boy' Friend ...its all about him and us and how bloody confusing everything got!

anyway... great write here!!

[~lost and in my fantisi..]

very nice! lots of emotion! life and love are not always easy and can be very confusing you just have to believe and have faith that everything happens for a reason

[r]

strong write and yeah! so yeah! lol sad though... this has happenned to me MANY of times... sorry that this had to happen to you though

[Frantzuu]

Strong and filled with sad emotions, great write.

This is so strong, and sad.

[deeps]

Such strong emotion and powerful vernt.
This is wonderful way to get feelings out.
I like this. Very well written.

[MagiCrystal]

I can't say a thought...not yet ! I will take my time on this one!
I'll be back ))))))