Oh God Please!

Oh God Please!

A Poem by Manda
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Just when I think I have found everything, God has to go and change things. I dont know what I want or even what I need. All I know is that I'm confused and supposedly falling in love

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Oh God please
Dont do this to me

Just when I think
I have found the one

You have to go and
Change things around

I thought I knew
What exactly I wanted

What I needed
And loved most

But now...
Its all just a blur

Oh God please
Dont do this

I beg of you
Please dont

I cant have you
Playing with my heart

I am not capable
Of loving everyone

I especially cant be falling in love
With my very best friend

God its not possible
It just isnt

God please
I beg of you

I cant love him
Not when I already have

© 2010 Manda


Author's Note

Manda
I have to vent. I have to write this out. I just dont know what to do! I cant be feeling this way! Especially with HIM! Oh dear lord! Well I hope you like this piece! And if you dont I am so sorry. I dont feel like this is one of my best pieces but I just needed to let it out... I dont know about the ending. It seems ok for now but I want to know what you think bout it. If you dont like it then dont rate! Please...! Just give your advice or comments! I am trying to raise my status! Thanks =)

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i love it

Posted 10 Years Ago


I liked this poem. Thanks for sharing this. :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


wow, so beautiful. Great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


wow...this was so great!!!!! and i can totally relate!! it was sarcastic and funny and you made something like this seem so important and you know what? it is!

I went through the same sorta thing once....read my poem My 'Boy' Friend ...its all about him and us and how bloody confusing everything got!

anyway... great write here!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


very nice! lots of emotion! life and love are not always easy and can be very confusing you just have to believe and have faith that everything happens for a reason

Posted 10 Years Ago


strong write and yeah! so yeah! lol sad though... this has happenned to me MANY of times... sorry that this had to happen to you though

Posted 10 Years Ago


Strong and filled with sad emotions, great write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is so strong, and sad.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Such strong emotion and powerful vernt.
This is wonderful way to get feelings out.
I like this. Very well written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I can't say a thought...not yet ! I will take my time on this one!
I'll be back ))))))


Posted 10 Years Ago



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