Jake

Jake

A Poem by Manda
"

He just doesn't get it. He is so mad at her that he won't even think about what she is going through.

"
Jake,
I am so sorry
That this had to happen

I never planned for things to end this way
I never wanted to lose you
Or even hurt you

Jake,

Please don't be mad
I can't stand you being hurt
It just kills me inside

I know you love me
And you can't get past the memories
Of us together

But Jake,
I don't love you the way I used to
The fire that we shared
Burned out

You were my best friend
And at one time my boyfriend
But now were nothing

Jake,
I am sorry you have to go through this
I know its not easy for you
But what makes you think its any easier for me

Everyday I go on loving someone else
And you continue to keep on loving me
Each and every day

Jake,

You keep saying you hate me
And that you should just get out of my life
But I don't want that

You and I both know that we cant leave each other
Its just not possible to just say goodbye
We share too many memories

Jake,
I am sorry for what is happening
But someday I hope you will understand
That what I am going through is not so easy either

I hope one day
You will be able to find someone to love
Just like I have
......

© 2010 Manda


Author's Note

Manda
This is happening right at this very moment!

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This isn't something any one wants to go through. Not every guy is going to understand....we all have to realize that. Good write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice write well done

Posted 14 Years Ago


I was about to say, I read this and thought "NO NO NO NO NO!!! /cry!"
This was a wonderful piece, Manda!! LOVED IT!
"But Jake,
I don't love you the way I used to
The fire that we shared
Burned out"
That stanza made me sad. Well, it made me almost cry. Then as i continued reading i started to actually cry :)
LOVELY piece, Manda!

Posted 14 Years Ago


You cant stay friends at an early age people arent mature enough to take it

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good I'm sorry to say I feel for Jake but understand it's also had for you. Everything will work it self out give it time and prayer.

Posted 14 Years Ago


sad yet beautiful , good job

Posted 14 Years Ago


Lots of guilt and pain, perhaps regret.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very sad poem, full of raw emotion. I like it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice good job who is jake

Posted 14 Years Ago


Whoa! Sad, nice writing, great flow, I love this one!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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