Who Knew

Who knew that her best friend would be such a killer.... Who knew that he was her next victim.

Johnny was my best friend
And one of the only friends I had.

He lived alone
In the brown house next door.

His mom and dad had died long ago
But nobody knows how...

I was the only friend of Johnny's
But I didn't know why...

Johnny was such a nice boy
And very handsome at that!

He had dark brown eyes
And wavy brown hair.

He was not too tall
But had a very muscular body.

He got pretty good grades
And all the teachers adored him.

Everyday Johnny and I would sit together
Eating our lunch.

We would talk about the latest pranks
And who would be our next victim.

I never thought that I
Would be on Johnny's list.

Until it happened
One day after school...

I had just gotten off the bus
And was heading for home.

Johnny was walking beside me
With his hands in his pockets.

His eyes were focused
And determined.

"Johnny, what are you thinking about?"
I asked curiously.

He looked up at me
His eyes filled with darkness

I felt fear
Go through my whole body

Johnny,
Never answered.

Instead he pulled out a gun
And aimed for my head.

Then it hit me
Like a sack of potatoes

Johnny had been the one
To murder his parents!

And now I,
His next victim!

Before I could tell him to stop
It was too late!

Johnny pulled the trigger
And bang!

Who knew that my best friend
Was a bloody killer...

Author's Note

Wrote this for a group. Its different I know. Something new!

Reviews

[alyssa vicknair]

That was amazing. Honestly, that is very messed up for their friend to be a killer.

[Ama May Cooper]

Honestly i think its lacking in something, the feelings and emotions lost .. it reads more like a poem, a distant lyrick balancing on memories.

Its a nice story a clear beginning and end, a deep and imaginative piece.

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

WOW . . . a real mind-blower . . . (no pun intended)
i'm definitely going to read this one over again haha

[Chloe Christine]

Oh, gosh.
In my library.
under favorites.
I don't know how to describe this!
it's awesome. like, really. :) nice.

[SamBug]

Wow, didn't see that coming. Very ironic and very good.

[Jess.]

Interesting piece, quite entertaining. It made me read fast to find out the ending, and I like writing that makes me do that.
Nice job.

[Wolfe Greytome]

I found this to be an interesting piece. While different from the style you usually write in, I thought it was a well written first attempt at something new. Well done!!

[Tate Morgan]

i GOTTA TELL YOU I THINK YOU ARE NOT REALLY DOING ANY BETTER.YOU NEED A DIFFERENT GENRE

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked it thought. It was good. I liked it. Love murder poems haha
Thanks for sharing. ;)

[Sofia N]

Loved it, Every line made me keep on reading and reading. Great Job on this one. Keep it up :)