Love And Lust

Love And Lust

A Poem by Manda

They are so in love. Loving and lusting with one another in the sheets. Forever

Me and you

Laying in bed

Our bodies

Naked and touching

There's a burning sensation

Of love and lust

As we play

In the sheets

© 2010 Manda

Author's Note

Just something... Feelings of love and lust makes me go crazy

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wonderful piece

Posted 9 Years Ago

recently, I've come in contact with things like this.
It's really pretty, and it rolls off your tounge.

Posted 9 Years Ago

short sweet and to the point i like it it tells the feeling without being to detailed and it gets the point across easily good job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Posted 10 Years Ago

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This is good, I wish you had elaborated it has the potiental to be even better..nice though.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Hmm, not bad, not bad. I kind of wish you had dug deeper into the emotional side of such a situation, but I did like the directness of your poem. The short and sharp lines worked really effectively, particularly near the beginning. Not quite there yet, but a great start nonetheless. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

I like the simplicity of this... a simple as two people naked together and thrilled by the feeling of bare flesh and soft touch and beating hearts and sheer arousal...

Posted 11 Years Ago

Interesting. Such a small poem but straight to the point. Very cute.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Aws! I love this! Very sweet and romantic! Hehe >_< Thank you very much for sharing this poem! =) -Rachel

Posted 11 Years Ago

I like this piece. It is short and to the point - nothing unnecessary in evidence.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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