Love And Lust

They are so in love. Loving and lusting with one another in the sheets. Forever

Me and you

Laying in bed

Our bodies

Naked and touching

There's a burning sensation

Of love and lust

As we play

In the sheets

Author's Note

Just something... Feelings of love and lust makes me go crazy

Reviews

[deeps]

This is wonderful, I enjoyed this.

[Indigo Ribbon]

Very simple, but good. I do think it is a little choppy, bu I like it; it adds to the effect. Good job!

[*Kantola*]

This was adorable :) I have this feeling so much... very simple, very short, very sweet! I LOVE IT :D

[Sseoni]

Nice poem! It was simple, but passionate and beautiful as well! I loved it! :D

[Scarlet Pulse]

Short, sweet and beautiful. I enjoyed it a lot. I do like the ending a lot too. I like how you use playful words. Great example of expressing your emotions.

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is kind and beautiful. I like the emotion and desire of love. Complete poem is very good. I like your ending. Love should as good as your described. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[loverly9316]

very simple and thoughtful i like it :)

[A.Lee]

This is good. I like the simplicity of it. You get the feeling without extra details. Well done.

[Silere]

Such a pure happy thought.. I love it... Nice job. Thank you for sharing!

Wow, this is so pretty and simple. I like it a whole lot :)